Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

New dummy map. Hope you enjoy ^^ No logo at the moment though.

(Ps, i really like the white moon if you haven't noticed)

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[teddi]

Hi
i spy with my little eye something small above cp 3

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it has grown hair!

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[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Haha thanks teddi xD Will upload fix another time when needed

[meew']

.. a girly i cant get cause she dont get to many likes //offtopic

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

I don't expect how i'm supposed to just improve without any feedback. And it's not just this time. I spent many months working on Arcadian, only to have stormphonix do 3 gameplay checks. It's kinda demotivating when you have testers that seem very limited in what they are willing to test (Mostly working, ready maps). With all my maps, it seems like i cant get any solid feedback. So yea. Some guidance would be really helpful, instead of being left in the dark 90% of the time.

[jao]

For design: Don't spam so many doodads and only place few or none in freeze/tele. Also get rid of your strange unhook structures.
For gameplay: More space and don't make everything as hard as possible. If you don't have to do the perfect trick it's more enjoyable mostly. The basics of the map are good tho.

[Tropo]

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i agree with jao this map is way to difficult and most parts you have to do perfect.
I really tried to play this map but at every 2. part there was something "insane".

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Thanks Jao and Tropo.

I was working on the fix and already fixed some of the things you mentioned Tropo. I have also simplified almost every single part. I have played through the map about 3 times today trying to get everything perfect, so i hope all is ok now.

@Jao - What do you mean remove the weird unhook structures?

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[Tropo]

I took again a close look on this map because in my opinion it has a lot of potential
found some bugs and some things you probably dont know.

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[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Thanks a lot Tropo. I really appreciate it.

I fixed all except the CP 14 'skip' and i also couldn't seem to find the entity bug you pointed out? Can you explain whats wrong there?

And i also noticed some missing grass top in one of your screens

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