The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

[Lumina]

Hello my name is Lumina and today i present you a
map called The East Desert by Sheep & Lumina

My map has a simple smoothie Desert theme, and i hope that this map can
be seen on a ddnet server.

Here is the map:

The East Desert.map

Version 0.1

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We need a logo for the map, if you are interested to make a logo look here:viewtopic.php?f=93&t=4818

That was all from my side thank you .

[jao]

Put your names in threadname

[Lumina]

fixed version 0.2

The East Desert.map

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fixed some bugs with Viper Tropo and Welf

[Lumina]

fixed version 0.3

The East Desert.map

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Made the suggestions from Welf.

[Lumina]

Final Version 0.8

The East Desert.map

Made the Suggestions from jao.

The Map needs a last overlook and the map is ready ^^

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added the logo from Wartopeth thanks to you , and thanks to another guys who was creating a logo.
Im glad that you helped me. ^^

[Wartopeth]

Hi, tested.
Good moderate map. Most of the screenshots are suggestions.

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[Lumina]

Thank you for testing our map.

As i can see you was testing the older version of this map, but it doesn't matter.

I only made the Suggestions to add here hook to go faster back,
i could see the point. so i addet it.
The cp's marker i just made entities off sign to let it made obvious that you hit a circle and that you have to go in a circle cp, so that would not confuse that much.

The design stuff what you see i wont really change that, because i like it how it is, and it looks for my eyes a lot better :c, Im sorry when i sound so selfish.

The parts where some things are useless, but i would not change it really. It is just a option if you wanna do it in that way or in a another, i let the tee choice what he wanna do.

The parts what you find annoying, i have to disagree, after you know how the trick or rhytm works, it will be easier than, so i wont change it.

I hope you can understand why i wont change to much Suggestions.
I like it how it is right now :>.

The Last Update of the map.

The East Desert.map

addet only hookablestuff to go faster back. 1.0 version

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[Wartopeth]

I tested 0.8 version (latest until this update) and yes, the design looks bad and you could improve it a lot and yes, the deep part is annoying compared to the rest of the map, but well, it's your map and that was my opinion. Thanks for the hook lines to go back faster btw.

your tee, Arcturus (ok, no).

[jao]

Tested with Destin.
The noobfilter is indeed useless. You don't need to do it once and also why is there a noobfilter if you can save all noobs anyways?
Parts that are too easy: cp3, 12, cp9 (+ laser thing after (you dont need laser at all), cp13, 42
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[Silex]

the design looks bad

Agree.