Whitemoon by Cellegen [Solo]

[jao]

I think this map can be released with some reworking.

[Cellegen]

Whitemoon.map

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-I do some fixes for finish the map easier.
-Rework

[teddi]

Can somebody upload the new version on test server please?

[jao]

done.

[teddi]

Thank u jao

Retested your map.

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I find the signs to be more confusing then helpful? I suggest to move switch 5 more to left and removing the sign for 5. Btw what are the hook things for xD ?

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Imo, it would be cooler to place freeze here(at the same spot too) and adding 1 more tile to right platform.

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Same design for unhookable/hookable, its not too critical but consistency is nicer ^^

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Its actually way faster to just jump back in tele..

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Faily edges, i guess u missed these.

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um you forgot the arrows xD

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Some unfreeze where im standing would be nice

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One arrow is enough for my taste

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Gameplay doesn´t blow my mind as I already stated but I guess its fine for a beginner map, would rate Solo 1*

[Cellegen]

1. and 3. pic: The hooktile was show you, that is unhookable. play with entities or try it its true or false but who cares? some times later you know what is this.

2. pic: hmm... nah, enough to go far to the tele too.

4. pic: I will fix it.

5. pic: Damn, I will fix it!

6. pic: ._____.

7. pic: ok I will fix it.

8. pic: hah! who cares? not important to change this

[teddi]

8. Would look better (^^)

[VipeR]

Cellengen please stop using the white box to write your post

[teddi]

3rd look.

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kinda boring that u just have to jump back down.. maybe make it backwards compatible like grenade part.

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again, faster to jump in tele.

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this is same as i already said before: faster to just go in tele -> so add maybe 1 tile platform and cp.

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xD

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[Cellegen]

1. pic: ok

2. pic: hm... ok I will fix it

3. pic: ok I will fix it

4. pic: .___,