Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

[N9mkOik:D]

Bugs fixed

[DanilBest]

No bugged

[N9mkOik:D]

Fix 2 skip
thx jao

[jao]

Tested the map.

Gameplay looks pretty decent and should overall be balanced.

Design is rather flawed:

• Structure is not clean. These unhook lines should be made as squares (like Back in the days, Stronghold etc.) and not in a "round" shape.
• The beams (group #5) should be transparent (lower alpha) and more saturated.
• Freeze/tele marking should use triangle corners instead of round ones in most cases (see this tutorial)
• Walljump marking should be blue-ish, green doesn't fit
• Tele marking should always be the same color - sometimes you have freeze marking under it wich leads to a different color
• Freeze/tele markings shouldn't be cut off, but closed with corners

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Bad TO-tele position, possible to run into freeze accidentaly

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Bad TO-tele position, likely to run into tele to the right wich is annoying. Also, CP should be unskipable.

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Useless CP; there are no teles in this part

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CP should be where the red marking is. Also, it's possible to fall down accidentaly. Should be prevented somehow.

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Remove freeze so players don't jump into it after being teleported

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You can jump on the marked edge instead of doing the part with shotgun

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Remove the marked blocks to make the part a bit more convenient

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What is the purpose of this weird construction? :D

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Add an entities off sign here

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Remove this tele so people don't run into it after being teleported. Also mark jetpack somehow.

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These one tile holes are annoying if you move after being teleported

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Wrong CP marking color

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Add a tele here

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[N9mkOik:D]

Removed almost all the errors which you told me.
I left cp4 So that people do not skip if fell from cp5
What you noticed on the design I'm not all fixed because I did not understand

[jao]

#5A87C8 would be a good color for group #5.
It's still annoying to walk into the tele on the left side of CTO 1 after being teleported.

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Corners should be like on the right side on the whole map

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Move CTO 4 to the right

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I suggest to remove this freeze design to make the edge more obvious

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I suggest to add a CP here

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Should be impossible to fail on either of the edges

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Entity bug

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I still don't like this. Better remove the tele and freeze completely IMO.

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This shield looks useless to me

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[N9mkOik:D]

Done

[Konsti]

lmao jao ur entities ugly af

[DanilBest]

Really, more bugs, this need add to corners to tele and freezes

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It was released or declined.

- DanilBest

[N9mkOik:D]

Added all bugs to corners , a little too much