The way to stars by N9mkOik [Solo]

[N9mkOik:D]

Hey guys,i created my new map called "The way to stars".
I hope I didn't make any mistakes

[Cellegen]

Your map is very tight and very short. design was so bad at all and you should be rework some parts too. But your map has some good 1-2* parts, i dont make pictures of these parts. but for be honest, you need to be learn some stuffs about mapping...... first the pictures, what you dont embedded.

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Red pictures: It needs to been EMBEDDED
Blue pictures: that pictures you dont used on the game, not needed sure.....
White pictures: it was right if you put the pictures to the right places.

[what pictures are was dont embedded and what pictures are won't used, we cant see it on the map.... just you because you had this pictures in your folder.]

[RayB.]

Hello N9mkOik ,

This map looks like your first one and I would like to say it's not that bad for the start. I got some things to criticize. All the parts you've mapped are known and in a bad connection. Means you should actually try to find your own parts or renew old parts with your own ideas. The connection between parts is also very important to give your map a special flow. This map is sadly not worth releasing because It's boring and bad mapped.

Here some tips:

1. For your next maps you should only name the map file like your map. Your name shouldn't be there. DDnet displays your name separately from your map name.

2. You don't need to put solo tiles on the start of a solo map.

3. Please learn how to embedd mapres. I'll leave you a link.

4. You should also know that when you map something you should also take time for the parts. Always try to get the best out of it, play it over and over and find some things you can improve.

I hope you can start something better with this these tips and the link.

Mapper Rules
General tips on ddrace mapping
How to make extraordinary maps

Sadly I have to repeat myself. When I said take your time I didn't mean 5min or 1 day but ok.

[Cellegen]

"Sadly I have to repeat myself."

Dont worry rayban, i will help you for teach this begginer ;D