Dark Light by sloppydog [Dummy]

[sloppydog]

Hello its me again ,I've mapped a new dummy map,hopefully i removed all bugs
I think its 3 stars easy 15 points

the starting line with logo and mini map teasers

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one of the epic parts

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one of the strange parts thats kinda faily

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the finishing line with bright lights XD

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Dark Light.map

the map file :P

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hope you enjoy testing and like it

[Pepe]

Hmm... I don't know what to say about this map.

First of all I don't like it, but that doesn't mean it should be rejected so fast.

The "epic" part is annoying, you have to get a perfect hammer and a perfect angle for the dummy.
You used a lot of useless signs all over the map and it's annoying too, since this is not a "tutorial" dummy map.
I didn't like the way you used the other HT, cause you can perfectly change it by putting unhookable or a tune. And also changing the design of it because it's ugly.

I took a lot of screenshots but I don't think is worth to post it right now.

Let's wait for another tester's opinion.

[sloppydog]

ty for feedback,should i change tp
and the non hook through part is meant to be a challenge
i can replace it at some parts but one part i beleave its should stay

[sloppydog]

thanks to novashock,stompie,Jimmy Jazz and others for testing my map,
sadly there was bugs ... but i fix them
i also changed tp design

Dark Light.map

updated map :P

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[jao]

tested by Starkiller

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[Wartopeth]

start has some bugs too (freeze while you are falling) and imo design needs a rework (It has some nice ideas so I could change design for you if more testers like the map ).

[sloppydog]

hey i fixed stuff on map

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ty for testing

[pixel]

Well, I didn't test this map good, just to this one part..
About the part:
It is too hard, nearly impossible to do it, becuase this one laser line is 'hooking' you without a break... and if you go alone down, you failed too, please fix this...
well....

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[Rico]

Hello guys,

I tested the map by myself with a little help from Silex and Welf but just for one part.
The atmosphere of the map (Look) is pretty cool. The desing is well done.
The parts are rather balanced. All are almost arround the same difficulty level. It is a short map so speedrunners be aware.
Many signs are reasonably placed. Many players would be confused and rage quit imo. Still if you wanna delete them do as you please.
One suggestion of Welf was to right click on the green dot in the map editor and to select "use aspect ratio". The moon is not round. This should make him round again.(I hope it is correctly described)
One part is unclear for me. I will contact you via PM to ask you how the part is done.
I have found some parts which could be uptadet to simplify and make the experience of the map more enjoyable. Will be listed down below in the spoiler as picture with descriptions.
And at last i gotta say bravo for including Tunezones. Even if they are not groudnbreaking ideas just the effort of including them is a good start.

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The "CP" would be better in use, if it would show the Checkpoint itself rather than the CTO tile.

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Make the ground, where my dummy is and the ceiling where i am at UNHOOKABLE to prevent from ppl saying, that the THROUGHOOK on the right is unecessary.

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Use the straight arrow to the left for the number one also but place it under the first UNHOOKABLE for the first part. It would make the part clearer.

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I would suggest to delete CP8 completly, bcs it could happen that the player drags the dummy into CP8 but at the same moment falls to his own CP. After that the dummy is not anymore reachable for the player anymore.

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For the rating:
- Brain: 2/5
- Skill (Difficulty): 2-3*
- Look: 4/5

Best regards Rico

PS:For those ppl who have negative things to say about some parts PLS explain yourself clearly why it is bad and give him at the same time a suggestion for the problem. Do not give him words like "DELETE" or smth smiliar without content. Thank you.

[sloppydog]

try so much for testing