Ewgad *Improved*

[CidrusFa]

First map!
Hope compliance.

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[mod=Index]moved the screenshots to a spoiler :p[/mod]

[RayB.]

The map is not really good. I think u can understand this since It's your first map. You should read the Mapper Rules and look for some Tutorials or help from other tees to make your next map better.

[CidrusFa]

Hi!
This map moderate 3 * * *
The map by:Ciniminix

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[Index]

Merged the topics, no need to create a new thread. Furthermore I moved the screenshots to spoilers again. Seems like you reworked your map, don't know if that is enough or if you should have just created a totally new map. But let's hear other opinions.
The tags are wrong now, still can't change them .__.

[CidrusFa]

That's good?

[VipeR]

Sorry,

map is in a terrible state. Bugs wherever i look. boring parts. Most Images a not embedded. Pls read the Mapper Rules before you post a map.
An example

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This is how the map looks to us!

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Rejected.

[CidrusFa]

I'm sorry that I took so many amateur mistakes stone.
Thanks for the link.
Fixed an amateur mistakes, in theory, it should be good.
But something I do not understand why you have such a large file? (812 kb)

Thanks for the help..

[aaa]

checked with Welf and we and had to agree with VipeR, most parts are either very repetitive or annoying
for example avoid using so many 1 tile holes they're just not fun and often cause the players to fail..
also you put tune zones in many parts but they have no effect?
to be honest i think you should start a new map and try to map less repetitive stuff :/

btw in the first posted versions there was no endline, no embedded images.. double check your maps before posting please, it only takes you a few minutes and saves time for everyone testing the map! if you don't have anywhere to host it you can use https://trashmap.timakro.de/ for now to test it online or with friends!
but it's ok for a first map, still better than most people's first try!

[CidrusFa]

After a long time,I tried to improve everything on my map,and that I could pull out
I hope you have a bit better ..

[CidrusFa]

After a long time,I tried to improve everything on my map,and that I could pull out
I hope you have a bit better ..