Miami

[Deeper]

moderate map :=3

Miami.map

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[Evoli]

i will testing this map
feedback will come later

[Evoli]

Well i tested this map.
My opinion to this map:
I dont like this graphic,
i have to make a a pause at my testing,because i didnt
got much motivation to play this map.
I liked your map PortalDown more.

Im sorry for my opinion but I will stop at here and will talk about this map

So this map contains:
-creative parts
-missing marks
-impossible parts
-cutting parts
-wrong marks
-a mix between big and tight parts
-bugs

What you could do:
You should take a look about this map and mark the Cp's ( Checkpoints )
and some more like : when i got jetpack, when do i lost it.
mark it.
Give this Marking a better design, i will show it on a screenshoot what i mean.
This map has a balance between normal and impossible parts.

Enough of that.
This Screenshoots shows you,what you could change:

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Mark the Solo tiles

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Give the tee's a chance, to join a team
more easier

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Put some arrows here.I didnt get it, how you are doing this parts with 2...

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You has 2 choices the 1.Remove the Freeze tiles here or 2.Add here freeze too

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Missing hookthrough

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Change this part,this part is unbalanced as hell

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Put the CTO 4 somewhere else( like add a platform and place it there) and put on the marked CTO 4 Check 4

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remove one rifle and remove 1 shield each block

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Add here something so i can hook there

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Forgot to mark there hook

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This is for me a graphic bug

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Missing hookthrough ( look at the white block)
and make on the blue blocks a Checkpoint

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You forgot to mark here something

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You forgot too add freeze after this blocks ( i really dont get it why you are doing this o.O)

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Remove the blue marked things

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I dont know if this was suppose to be,
but this hookabled is not marked

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Wrong marked

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Make here a tele to go back ( very annoying if tees are blocking your the way to go back)
Red: add Hook here( not needed)

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I have no idea where should i go first,
Please help me senpai, where i should go first

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Remove this blue things

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Cutting way

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Not used background, delete it

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#1 not used, delete it

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Mark the switches

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Cutting way

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that is what i mean with bad marking things,
You should really make a better mark design of this map

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A stupid tutorial to cut the shotgun part

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[Deeper]

Well i tested this map.
My opinion to this map:
I dont like this graphic,
i have to make a a pause at my testing,because i didnt
got much motivation to play this map.
I liked your map PortalDown more.

Im sorry for my opinion but I will stop at here and will talk about this map

So this map contains:
-creative parts
-missing marks
-impossible parts
-cutting parts
-wrong marks
-a mix between big and tight parts
-bugs

What you could do:
You should take a look about this map and mark the Cp's ( Checkpoints )
and some more like : when i got jetpack, when do i lost it.
mark it.
Give this Marking a better design, i will show it on a screenshoot what i mean.
This map has a balance between normal and impossible parts.

Enough of that.
This Screenshoots shows you,what you could change:

thanks for the test, I think tomorrow will do the fix, I should do another BG?

[Deeper]

Well i tested this map.
My opinion to this map:
I dont like this graphic,
i have to make a a pause at my testing,because i didnt
got much motivation to play this map.
I liked your map PortalDown more.

Im sorry for my opinion but I will stop at here and will talk about this map

So this map contains:
-creative parts
-missing marks
-impossible parts
-cutting parts
-wrong marks
-a mix between big and tight parts
-bugs

What you could do:
You should take a look about this map and mark the Cp's ( Checkpoints )
and some more like : when i got jetpack, when do i lost it.
mark it.
Give this Marking a better design, i will show it on a screenshoot what i mean.
This map has a balance between normal and impossible parts.

Enough of that.
This Screenshoots shows you,what you could change:

Miami.map

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FIXED
not all.

And make standart BG

[Welf]

evoli the 5th screen isn't a bug
the water inside the grass_main is not important, if you only see it with a overlay value like 50 (overlay 50 is rather for testers than for players)

[hi_leute_gll]

Very weird map and not even playable, since the spawn is somewhere in the map.

[hi_leute_gll]

No mapper's response since 3 weeks, Archive.