Novice Map "Icebreaker"

[AKc0RiZer]

Hey guys,

That's my first DDrace Map
I hope it's good enough

[phacrum]

i guess u missunderstood something
better take a watch at another map in editor

[AKc0RiZer]

hmm i didn't know how to place those hook-through-tiles correctly so i joined the maps "planet mars" and "kobra".
i thought i placed them right afterwards.

[phacrum]

yes u placed them right but with the wrong layer
use the frontlayer(right click on game-group and add front)

u can take a look at the version i uploaded

[AKc0RiZer]

ah ok thanks for this information

[deen]

@phacrum: only testers can download maps uploaded here. =/ I sent AKc0RiZer a PM with the map.

[AKc0RiZer]

yeah tried it and works now

[AKc0RiZer]

found another 2 map fails while trying out with my dummy and fixed them.
here's the new one

[Index]

Hey,
I quickly tested your map with super and /pause. I have to say, that it's nice for your first ddrace map, well done. But unfortuantely there are only standard parts, which make the whole map kinda boring. Don't get me wrong the design is good and the map is playable, but it's not that creative or special. It's just another novice map that can be good, but I miss something. Something beside these standard laser parts, short deep drags and standard dummy drags... So maybe we should not take that map, sry but idk :( Other opinions?
However here are a few things I noticed:

[AKc0RiZer]

thx for this feedback index
i try to be more creative with my future maps
this endless hook thing is because the tees have to go back left after bringing the other tee to the right
otherwise they would have endless the whole race