Peter White by Arcturus [Moderate]

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Peter White by Arcturus [Moderate]

Post by Wartopeth »

Short and easy map , should be hard novice or maybe an easy moderate (I think is novice 5 but you'll decide that xd).
Test it if you have time :)
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Re: Peter White

Post by kosho »

The map is nice but imo is not even close to novice, 'coz too much kill and much deeps ;)
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Re: Peter White

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Tested with Fnokurka and we think its a pretty nice map with some original parts in it. Design Looks fine to me also the map fits more to moderate.

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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by Wartopeth »

TY for testing!

About the screenshots:
1-. "move the start line", Declined since I really don't want to convert this part in a long "noobfilter".
"change kill to tele", Remember that you can cheat teles with ninja! (but I put some teles over your green text)
2-. "Team GG" is my clan.
3-. Added unendless.
4-. It's marked and the next room has undeep too... but ok, done!.
5-. Added "Hold" text and unendless.
6-. Idk why but ok...added teles.
7-. I didn't see it, TY.
8-. mmh, done.
9-. apparently the freeze (switch) didn't work so....replaced with Speedup!.
10-. Done.

PS: I would like to read more opinions about the kind of server. The map has deep and kill tiles?, yes but it's not harder than some novice maps on ddnet servers, anyway thanks again!.
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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by Wartopeth »

Ok, I reworked a lot of things on this map so I think now is a real moderate map (and deserve that tag).
Changes:
- Harder parts in the whole map (I love how it looks now).
- New design and logo.
- Replace of the old hookthrough tiles.
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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by Ninjed »

Hi, tested map.
I think this is very good one.
I'd rate as Moderate 5
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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by Wartopeth »

Remake (bigger & harder)
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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by StorмPʜöɴix »

In my opionion a too long solopart, but besides that, its a harder moderate map. ^^
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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by jao »

Checked with VipeR and Stormphönix.
The map is way too big, gets realy boring and also annoying.
Basicly you make everything too long. It gets realy boring if you are deep for 20 mins and the other guy has to do same stuff for multiple times, thats what dummy maps are made for. Also try to not map everything so complicated. You often don't even know what you should do, because of strange back teles or weird stoppers, just to make it harder. Also it's not nice to have such a long (moderate) map and place kill tiles everywhere just to make the map harder.

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Re: Peter White by ☠Arcŧurus☠

Post by Wartopeth »

jao wrote:Checked with VipeR and Stormphönix.
The map is way too big, gets realy boring and also annoying.
Basicly you make everything too long. It gets realy boring if you are deep for 20 mins and the other guy has to do same stuff for multiple times, thats what dummy maps are made for. Also try to not map everything so complicated. You often don't even know what you should do, because of strange back teles or weird stoppers, just to make it harder. Also it's not nice to have such a long (moderate) map and place kill tiles everywhere just to make the map harder.

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Yep, my fault.
Maybe the previous version is better (3.0)
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