NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

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NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by ElNuVaTo »

Map Created by ElNuVaTo, This is my first map that I publish c: I hope you like it, that it takes me a long time That you fix it and the bugs xD I hope you like it <3
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Re: Map NubiNight

Post by Deeper »

Sorry, but map will be declined , some parts interesting (like TP 9, TP 14,...) But it itself is not good for ddnet, in any case it is your first map)
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Re: Map NubiNight

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Sorry, the map was not good enough and not design.
But can read to Mapper Rules and our Tutorial Section.

Good luck your next map :)
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NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by ElNuVaTo »

I hope you like this map, please if you reject tell me what is wrong to improve in the next map <3 ,
On this map change everything
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by ElNuVaTo »

Fix the design in some part and some small bugs ,
and erase some things
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by ElNuVaTo »

Tested with sorgaxD
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

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New start :D
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

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Your map seems to have some issues:
  • Simple, boring ddmax-style parts.
  • Messy structure
  • Some annoying parts (e.g. weapon tele without jump before tele 16)
Until these things are vastly improved, your map has been declined.
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by ElNuVaTo »

I add new part and modify some I hope you like: D
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Re: NubiNight By ElNuVaTo [Moderate]

Post by Oblique. »

I just looked over your map again and it seems like the same major problems are present. You still have many uncreative ddmax-style parts, and the structure is not any better. I would suggest starting a new map from scratch that includes more developed parts. Take your time as you map, and try make something interesting or special in every part. For now, I'm sorry to say that this map has been declined.
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