dune by Shorefire

[Shorefire]

Seems there has been a lack of novice maps recently, thought I'd give making one a go.

Novice 2-3 stars at most, nothing super complex. Just a shortish cute map.

[Broken]

seems good simple map

[Index]

That's a really good novice map, simple gameplay and nice design :3
I didn't found any gameplay mistakes, so here are just a few small graphical things. Note that, I just ran through it quickly with /pause and super. So, another testrun is required before release. About the difficulty, it's at least novice 2* but most likely harder.
Oh, and is it really necessary that the sun rotates as well, I find that kinda confusing..

[Shorefire]

Meh, I like the way it looks. The moon rotating was intentional, I think it looks cute.

Also on the last screenshot it's also intentional, if you look to the right you can see that it slants up again to smooth out.

I also dont plan to change the wheels. Thanks for the suggestions though.

[Skeith]

I love solo maps.

[hi_leute_gll]

Showed mapper 2 things to fix.
He didn't want to and started insulting me.

So map shouldn't be released atm.

[Shorefire]

You shows me things to fix that dont even matter*

Edit by deen: Removed insults

[Welf]

hi_leute_gll told me, that you didn't want to embed "light" ?
it should be added, it is not default (it is in ddnet client)

[hi_leute_gll]

You shows me things to fix that dont even matter*

Not embedded a mapres wich needs to be embedded and an unsed layer.
Snd is not that important, but woudl be cool if you would fix it.
Fst ist very important if you want other players to see the map correctly.

How is this *** a tester?

Maybe cause i know why you have to fix this?

[gdin]

Nice map, simple and looks good. I'd say nov 2