Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]

[honk]

Hi, this is kinda my first map, and the map is dummy friendly. I would be happy about some opinions.

[Deeper]

Sorry, but map is bad.
check this rules before add a map to the forum:
viewtopic.php?f=9&t=722
will be Reject

[honk]

Okay, Thank you for looking at my Map. But could you maybe be a little bit more specific? Because then i would know what exactly to improve for my next map. And which of the rules are not fulfilled?

[Deeper]

well,
- Basics "uncreative" parts
- Very bad and unplayable design
- Every entity that the player should know about should likewise be clearly marked with a visible tile ~ rules
Just look on other moderate maps and try to make a really good map

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[Lumina]

Tested the map with some dude.

Have to agree with deeper.
the map has Bad parts,
it looks so uncreativ.

The parts itself looks Like you mapped in 5 minutes, and didnt tested, that meight could work.

some tele are missing.
the map gets fast boring and should not get released in ddnet.

That all from my side.

[mod=jao]Moved the topic to Archive. Also, the mapfile's name should include only the map name.[/mod]

[honk]

Okay Thanks for your effort. I will try to do it better next time!