Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D » Sat Jan 20, 2018 2:11 pm

Bugs fixed
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by DanilBest » Sat Jan 20, 2018 2:14 pm

No bugged :D
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D » Sat Jan 20, 2018 5:31 pm

Fix 2 skip
thx jao
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by jao » Sun Jan 21, 2018 12:55 am

Tested the map.

Gameplay looks pretty decent and should overall be balanced.

Design is rather flawed:
  • Structure is not clean. These unhook lines should be made as squares (like Back in the days, Stronghold etc.) and not in a "round" shape.
  • The beams (group #5) should be transparent (lower alpha) and more saturated.
  • Freeze/tele marking should use triangle corners instead of round ones in most cases (see this tutorial)
  • Walljump marking should be blue-ish, green doesn't fit
  • Tele marking should always be the same color - sometimes you have freeze marking under it wich leads to a different color
  • Freeze/tele markings shouldn't be cut off, but closed with corners
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Bad TO-tele position, possible to run into freeze accidentaly
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Bad TO-tele position, likely to run into tele to the right wich is annoying. Also, CP should be unskipable.
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Useless CP; there are no teles in this part
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CP should be where the red marking is. Also, it's possible to fall down accidentaly. Should be prevented somehow.
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Remove freeze so players don't jump into it after being teleported
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You can jump on the marked edge instead of doing the part with shotgun
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Remove the marked blocks to make the part a bit more convenient
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What is the purpose of this weird construction? :D
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Add an entities off sign here
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Remove this tele so people don't run into it after being teleported. Also mark jetpack somehow.
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These one tile holes are annoying if you move after being teleported
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Wrong CP marking color
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Add a tele here

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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D » Sun Jan 21, 2018 5:31 am

Removed almost all the errors which you told me.
I left cp4 So that people do not skip if fell from cp5
What you noticed on the design I'm not all fixed because I did not understand
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by jao » Sun Jan 21, 2018 7:57 pm

#5A87C8 would be a good color for group #5.
It's still annoying to walk into the tele on the left side of CTO 1 after being teleported.
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Corners should be like on the right side on the whole map
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Move CTO 4 to the right
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I suggest to remove this freeze design to make the edge more obvious
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I suggest to add a CP here
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Should be impossible to fail on either of the edges
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Entity bug
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I still don't like this. Better remove the tele and freeze completely IMO.
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This shield looks useless to me

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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D » Mon Jan 22, 2018 8:11 am

Done
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by Konsti » Mon Jan 22, 2018 10:25 am

lmao jao ur entities ugly af
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by DanilBest » Mon Jan 22, 2018 12:06 pm

Really, more bugs, this need add to corners to tele and freezes
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D » Mon Jan 22, 2018 2:34 pm

Added all bugs to corners , a little too much
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