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Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:20 pm
by Syltoox
hey guys, i made my first map. hope you will enjoy

post comments about what i can change or something.
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Re: Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:03 pm
by SkiLLz
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Re: Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:10 pm
by fokkonaut
played the map. the map is definitly to short and the parts are not nice :/ Imo this map should be rejected.
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Re: Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:20 pm
by StorмPʜöɴix
Heaya Syltoox,

obviously i tested your very first map and gonna say its not as bad as SkiLLz symbolized it (Well not in that mean way). But he got right point tho, the map as it is now, wont be released on ddnetservers. Also reworking the current map isnt that good of an idea, since the structure itself isnt that great at all. Its your first map afterall so dont feel bad about it, everyone did a lot of mistakes on their first maps.

To focus on the postiv aspects on this map:
I like its flow, and it was kinda fun to play to be honest.

But: The map is pretty much unbalanced, for example the goresparts are too hard in relation of the other parts.
You dont need the SG at all so always try to skip your own parts, to see if you need to improve it.
The Parts itself arent that creative, i mean sure, Mod1* isnt easy to implement new parts, but they at least should be a bit creative, or very well mapped.
The Design is extremly simple - too simple, no background and the unhookable + Hookthrough doesnt look very nicely.
The Map is too short, try to make you maps at least a bit longer. (Just a few min)

I mean i did enjoy playing this map, but thats it, its not like its gonna end up as a good moderate map, but keep trying!
Just take a more time for the next map, and try to gain some more experience.

Re: Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:30 pm
by Syltoox
Thanks for playing and rate the map :)

Re: Freezy by Syltoox [Moderate] 1*

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 5:59 pm
by RayB.
Mapper asked me to delete the topic so I archive it.