Stranded by fokkonaut [Brutal]

[fokkonaut]

hi this is my new map^^
its about 20-30 min

[worstwish]

novice

[meew']

a worse generica

[fokkonaut]

added a tp thx konstey

[fokkonaut]

rayb made the colors a bit darker

[StorмPʜöɴix]

Aint a bad map, but quite unbalanced. Better talk to you while we test it togheter.

[jao]

Do you have Themix' permission to use the background from Mystic River? If not you have to change it.

'water' tileset has to be embedded. Why do you need two tilesets for freeze/teleport? I'm pretty sure all markings can be done with 'ddnet_tiles5'. You can delete most tiles from 'generic_island_stuff'. For 'stars_edited' you can use a cuted version of stars (I can send you a default background with stars if you don't know how to cut quads). Instead of empty layers ('---') to seperate layers you could just order stuff in groups, or at least delete the empty layers after you're done mapping.
Most of those improvements will save fill space.

I didn't play the map, but just from spectating you can tell that it's a lot inspired by Naufrage, Generica and other maps. You should maybe try to find your own style instead of just straight copying other maps. (same ending as Generica, copied version of Im' corneum's entity logo, same hook/unhook/grass as Imposand, ...)

[Welf]

Isn't every map like Generica and Naufrage? In my opinion that doesn't need to be a bad thing. For me this map doesn't look like a copy of another map.

[fokkonaut]

i got the design (+ background) from Loop :3 i dont know where he got it from

[hi_leute_gll]

Isn't every map like Generica and Naufrage?

No.