Karrinx By Javiiersh[Moderate]

[Javiiersh]

Hi there! This is my first attempt to create a map And I want to upload it to ddnet ... I hope you like it and let me know and you find bugs or something ...
I am looking forward to your response

[fokkonaut]

these are no server settings^^ plus there are unused groups you can delete

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put the shield at the solo part at start vertical not horizontal like they are. because otherwise the shotgun is cheatable and can be used in the race

[Javiiersh]

Done, Fixed Issues .... I send the map again

[Welf]

Hey,
i am sorry about your map, we wont release it, unless you change alot.

Often u made simple drag parts, these drag parts are rather uncreative, they repeat themselves and some are much longer/harder than others.
Some other parts are too easy/too basic. It seems like u did not really try to be creative.
Death tiles in the end are wrong, since it is a jetpack part and your players are not jetpack pros. The gores part close to the end is a good part.
Most of the laser rifle parts are just too broing, because you have to laser and wait all the time.
You made some entitie bugs, try to run the map with "cl_overlay_entities 50"

The design is weird. U used alot of stuff in a wrong way.

Good luck on your future maps. I don't think that this map is worth reworking it.
Try to play the map with friends and ask them for feedback. Try to be more creative overall.

[Javiiersh]

Hello, I send again my reworked map I hope you like it because I change a lot of things and I strive to learn...
[mod=Index]Merged with the archived topic and moved back to testing (:[/mod]

[jao]

Don't see any improvements. You should try to map a new map instead of reworking this. Look at good maps, figure out how they are mapped and be creative instead of copying existing parts. Also consider Welf's tips.
[declined]jao; Karrinx[/declined]