"Ruby" by Pulsar and Ravie[Novice]

[Ravie]

Hello! My friend PulsaR and I have made a map, it would be cool if it got to ddnet

Map name: Ruby
Creators: PulsaR & Ravie
Difficulty: * * * * * Novice?

[Cellegen]

-A fast test:

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The map is 3* I guess, no parts here 4* or less then 3*.

The dark style is good, but not for freeze and tele tiles. Its 70% same with tele, pls make the tele darker. (if tele's color is changed, make sure change the deeptile's color too.)
Put DDnet tiles picture behind on the game layer. (looks better)

I guess its enough for ya

[Ravie]

I fixed everything you pointed out, thx for quick feedback ^^

[Cellegen]

whoah, firstly, pls make a new reply and in reply the uploaded map*. cuz we dont know what version is good for we.

[Ravie]

sorry, it's my first time posting a map ( ,_,)

[Index]

Don't worry, just take care from now on :p
The mapname should be always the same, not with FIX at the end or something like that.
Furthermore you should not use unnecessary special charachters like ! in the name.
And just attach the file to your latest post, like Cellegen said.

Basically like this:

[Ravie]

ok thx, I'll remember in the future xD

[Wartopeth]

Well, some parts are really tiny, others in my opinion unbalanced but I think this could be released after some rework.
Logo is beautiful, but I think you should make even more visible the contrast of colors (hook/unhook) because sometimes is confusing.
The BG is quite empty, just a couple of clouds and a moon.
Important information should be marked with entities of sign, teleports one block above the ground with unfreeze (to/cto).

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[Ravie]

I fixed (hopefully) everything you mentioned, waiting for more goofs to fix ;D

[meew']

your map looks really cool ill have a look at it tomorrow