Adult by Konsti [Novice]

[jao]

Map by Konsti

[HaHAxD]

tested the map with Konsti very nice map should be 1 star novice ofc it´s my Niveau so i should know it and I think it should get released as fast as possible because many noobs would be happy to Play a new novice map again after Long time

[jao]

update

[teddi]

played it.

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in a novice 1* map u cant just write "hammerfly", maybe explain short.

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+unfreeze pls

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i guess u know this: whole part can be skipped.

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add another arrow (to right) like in the 2nd thing

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unfreeze

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[Welf]

I just did a testrun. Bugs i found:
-crucial bug: you have to embedd the "font_teeworlds"-image!
-the map is dark, it's hard to read the fonts (some people have a dark screen)

If you really want to make a map for beginners, take a few hints:
-the map is confusing, sometimes there are different ways, it is stupidly confusing for beginners
-it seems like you want to teach them "if you see a tube, just jump in and you will land good" that's not what they should learn (that parts are useless in my opion)
-why do you use deepfreeze? its not needed and just more confusing in my opinion (they wont understand the idea of deepreeze since they are about to understand the idea of freeze)

-i don't like these thingys, they are often blocking (so you have to waste an extra second on jumping, they are all over the map, you don't need them

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edit: i hope i didnt test the old version, i thought it is uploaded since jao uploaded the most recent version here in forum

[Konsti]

Okey, i embed font_teeworlds, so maybe its just a 2-3* novice

[teddi]

Seems like you ignored our feedback or you are not interested in getting the map released, so i wont bother to post more stuff.
Replayed this map: Its short and made of very standard novice parts or things that i wouldnt even call parts (jumping down freeze into unfreeze). I dont like it, not even as an easy/beginner map.

[meew']

map is solid
i like the countless skips you bild in for speedrunning
2 screens:

[Ñı©Ø]

I tested the map, I think 3* novice...
I don't know if we will release it because there is nothing special, if the mapper replies maybe we can figure something out... here are some bugs and suggestions I have found:

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Oh and also I don't like how the stars look... they're in couples every time... it's kinda stupid

[Konsti]

No matter, i did this map for HaHAxD* cuz he want to have perfect 18k points.
Not important now, map isnt that bad but as you said its nothing special, you can decline it.