Run_Spacequest

[Cellegen]

[color=#000000]Hello! It's me Cellegen and I show you my first race map!

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INFORMATIONS:
-Made about the "Spacequest" map
-Simple design
-Simple gameplay
-Animated tiles
-Made for run
- 0 star map
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[Cellegen]

[b][color=#000000]Oops... I forgot its a race map :D[/color][/b]

[color=#000000]-Fixed sv_solo[/color]

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[clefairy']

Oval moon

[Cellegen]

[color=#000000][b]For Pikou300:[/b]
-Changed oval moon to normal moon
-Added lamps with lights[/color]

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[Ninjed]

Again you...

[Cellegen]

Again you...

again me C:

[jao]

yo Cellegen, nice that you tried to map a race map

Sadly I think you are not familiar with race, so this turned out to rather be a ddrace map.

A race map should allways have flow for speedruning especially when its a 0* map.
Those things destroy the flow:

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Also there is no hookthrough or stoppers in race, just stoppers to prevent someone from falling back a part in longruns.

Its better if you dont have to walk 100m to the startline, its just time waisting.

Design:

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buggy when you zoom out because background quad is not 0/0 para

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embedd red highlighted things

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- The generic background should be more different from unhook
- Put the generic background, stars/moon and the lamps in HD

Imo this is one of your best maps so far, but I think its not worth to release it (also I think race 0* wont be released in general).

[Cellegen]

Thx jao for reporting!

[color=#000000]-All of "destroyed" part was fixed and much better.
-First design picture: I fixed F.CKIN HARDLY! but I solved and you can zoom out now normally 8-) :lol:
-Second design picture: Fixed. Now "red" pictures was embeded and the other pictures was deleted. :D
-Added windows with shadows.
-HD pictures added in: Stars - Moon - Unhook - Logos - Background... etc.
-Changed background[/color]

@Jao: Thanks for anything about this map! I like racemaps and sometimes I race with my friends in PcP... So I know somethink about racemaps. Firstly: The design was important for 0* maps. Ye, I tried mapping first and after that designing. But now... not the design... but by your correct examples... the gameplay bad as well... I fixed that and sorry for waiting after you wrote this report post. Thx again for reporting and I hope its finally good now hehehe

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[jao]

I think you didnt understand what I mean. Hookthrough and stoppers are not a part of race(gameplay), so you shouldnt use them if you want this to be a race map.
Flow is kinda good now, but some parts are too tight and the 1 tile hooks are annoying. Also at the end you should be able to go directly into finish with a rocketjump. For me its still a issue that you have to walk so long till you reach the startline. A 0* race map should be for speedruns, so you want to instantly try again after you failed.
The design is fine now. I realy like your bg with the stars, but the moonrays are ugly imo.

[Ninjed]

stoppers part of race lol