OMOI

[ιקαtгאк]

Hey!

I want to show you my first map called "OMOI". I would give 1-3 brutality stars.

[ιקαtгאк]

Okay. So i tested map with CrashtimeHD and >(^.^)>#. Thanks guys ^^. There is newest version of map

[Loca]

Meh, simply create a server and play with me, I want to test it with you = ^) may prove to be cool

[StorмPʜöɴix]

Alright, took a look on the map, cause your "Teaser" made me interested. But sadly thats it. Dont wanna be mean, but i dont think this map is gonna be released here, without taking ALOT work into it. I might be wrong (cause i didnt really play it) but 90% of the parts look really thight, and kind of annoying. Although there might be some good ideas on this map, they arent mapped really good, which isnt a big deal since its your first map, you will get through that. And on the ohter Hand we got many used Parts, which arent special, or good.

And the colours.
I dont know if you dont see them, because the combination of the colours is awful. ^^ Mabye try something more matching

I would advise you to create a new map, and put some time into it. Now as you konw the basics it should be easier to get a good map done
But mabye you want to wait for another opinion first ^^

[Lumina]

I have tested the map,

Map has not a good gameplay,

The start where you need to get unsolo in many ways,
the balance between a shotgun part or a jetpack part is totally different,
the shotgun part is 10 times easier as jetpack and other ways, it should have the same flunce, the diffivult should be the same.
Like stormphonix already explained, the tight parts,

If you would play this map with 2 guys, maybe it is okay....
but playing in a big group its cancer.
The next point is the next parts, there totally unbalanced, there are nearly some parts which are easier or harder, you should really try to have a balance in to it.

All in all the map should be really rewoked, im for not release for now.
Have a good idea.

[aaa]

checked with jao, agreed with what has been said, especially this

Although there might be some good ideas on this map, they arent mapped really good, which isnt a big deal since its your first map, you will get through that.

sums it up perfectly imo, it's still not bad at all for a first map)

moving to archive for now