Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

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Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

Post by Jimmy Jazz The 1st » Tue Aug 09, 2016 10:06 pm

Hi all. I just finished mapping my first map. Please could someone test and let me know what you think. Im not too sure on the difficulty. Maybe moderate 3-4 star. Also please any suggestions would be really helpful :) Thanks all.
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Re: Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

Post by jao » Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:22 pm

hey i tested the map.
i guess because this is your first map you wanted to try out alot different things. Because of this the map looks very random and has no real structure, id suggest you to keep the tp design normal and not so weird, imo it doesnt look good. Also alot doodads/sun and desert tileset are not fitting and wrong used.
you can learn how to use the tilesets/doodads correctly by looking at the standard maps or maps on ddnet.
the map also has alot entitiy bugs. for the next map you should test with 50% enitity overlay. (for examples look the screens)
i didnt see any new part and they were badly mapped.
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tp not designed and tp in unhook
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no hook gametiles on the left
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Re: Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

Post by VipeR » Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:43 pm

Agree with jao
Map doesnt look good, parts are Not good enough, too simple Design, many bugs and like jao said, the map is more like a mess.

But that is normal, its your First map!
Keep on trying. Thing about how the finished map should look like. You can Do it.

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Re: Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

Post by Jimmy Jazz The 1st » Thu Aug 11, 2016 8:26 am

Cool, thank you for the feedback guys! I will keep trying! :D
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Re: Kawabanga by Jimmy jazz

Post by Ninjed » Thu Aug 11, 2016 2:01 pm

You're welcome
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