Tiji

[Im 'corneum]

i think this is my First 2-Player map.
thanks to index

[Index]

Feels like a really good map, looking forward to play it on the servers. So, I'm glad that I could help there :)
I fixed some minor things and wrote the cfg lines directly in the map.

There are 200+ unused envelopes but I'm too lazy to remove them ._.

[RayB.]

maybe take care about your other maps that you have posted here and are waiting for your response

[VipeR]

didnt check gameplay but looks faily..

some bugs and suggestions:

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[Im 'corneum]

fixed

[Soreu]

Could anyone tell me what server it belongs to?

[VipeR]

Brutal

[Oblique.]

Wow this is really faily. Brutal 4 stars.

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1) Some of the toteles are on the ground.
2) Imo the unhookables in the background are too strong, making your map look really cluttered.
3) Put some things in high detail.
4) Put ddnet tiles below the game layer.

5) The stopper is useless, you can reach the ground with hook.

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6) Tele 6 seems too easy to be a full part in the map. I suggest that you remove the teleporters on the bottom.

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[Im 'corneum]

first screen: you are doing it from the wrong way. that is two parts both performed from the middle hole.
second: i dont understand

[Oblique.]

First screen: yes, we did it from the middle hole.
Second screen: the marking is backwards, look at jao's hookcoll.