In-sky's

[Carrey]

Hello, this is my first map, we need tests and constructive criticism.

[VipeR]

1. UNBALANCED. novice 2* - mod 2* parts
2. dont place ToTele on the ground!
3. bad design
4. Bugs:

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missing unhook

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too many HT

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missing hook

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missing hook

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entities off sign pls

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HT bug

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too many shields

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missing freeze

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missing block

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unmarked unfreeze

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[Carrey]

1. UNBALANCED. novice 2* - mod 2* parts
2. dont place ToTele on the ground!
3. bad design
4. Bugs:

1. Could you tell me how I can reach a good balance
2. fixed
3. It's my first map what do I have to do to get a good design
4. I fixed most bugs, but I not fully understood, what do you mean on this screenshot screenshot_2016-05-28_13-49-01.png

P.S. sorry for my bad english)

[VipeR]

mainly the laser part is unbalanced. To get a better balance play you map, and think about if some parts are way harder then others. play some novice map with the same dificulty to get a little idea how hard parts should be.

3. I know first time is hard, this will be getting better. maybe ask some mapper for tips
4. Add a entities off sign ( its for entities player to know what to do)

[Wartopeth]

Tested. Sadly I think this needs a complete rework. Most parts are so tiny an really unbalanced that I couldn't even imagine 5 players in one of them (seriusly, some parts are novice one and others moderate two). Please use red teleport and put unfreeze in TO and CTO, is annoying wait. You should also take a look in the recent released maps because they follow the actual mapping rules (well, I hope). Another option is read tutorials or ask help from an experienced mapper... btw, I couldn't finish the map because is imposible reach the finish line , so please test each part of your map many times before posting a new version (or another new map) here.

[Carrey]

I hear you, thank you for criticism, I will continue to think along these lines, and finishing on the card, I took it with a dummy)

[RayB.]

Something tells me that the mapper won't return.
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