Re: Tragedy
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 3:17 pm
your map has been denied the design is bad
i think the parts have some nice ideas but alot parts are annoying and boring.
the design is very simple and doenst look good, it would be better if you use grass tileset correctly and add some doodads. Also you forgot to add the edges in grass tileset and in some parts are no freeze/tp edges.
i like the flames but it looks strange with generic under it.
The last part will never work if there are 10+ players or some trolls.
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- deep colour looks like bg, maybe write "deep" where deep actually is
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- design bug
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- this unhook looks like it should be hook, because the main part of it is grass tileset, maybe put the generic over grass. this is all over the map
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- you can skip the first tp
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- the thing with the buttons is just annoying, no skill
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- the shields are useless
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- you can skip the way to the nade if your mate hooks you there. the arrow on the right looks like you have to go there first for me, you should remove it.
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