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Shortrun

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a short solo map. its not very hard :)
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I took a quick look.
The design is weird.
The difficulty is always the same but the parts become faily.
Repeating tiny Jetpack parts.
Repeating hard Laser parts.
Some good shotgun ideas but sadly Bad implemented.

Suggestions :
Brighter design.
More place for Jetpack and longer Jetpack parts.
More place for the Laser parts.
Tele for the shotgun parts.
Maybe a new "gores part".

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Re: Shortrun

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this is better? and no, i dont want a new gores part
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Some pars annoying. i think u can rework design, IMO
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sry for the bugs haha :D and why rework the design?
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Re: Shortrun

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found 1 more bug... :D
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Re: Shortrun

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Dunno what to say, quality of the map is low.
Nothing cool or unusual, just annoying map and in some moments random.

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Gz for changing map name by adding space on end...
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Re: Shortrun

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This map shouldn't be released as it is now.
The most parts are repeating itself. You made long parts, that causes that you often have to repeat alot of stuff you already did, when you fail (in this map that is really annoying, it's not too bad in general).
Yes you tried to make unique parts (and that is good), but in my opinion they are mostly annoying aswell.

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