Holiday's Sky

[eliminator]

Hey i added shadows and i fixed some bugs.

[hi_leute_gll]

This map has some design and gameplay issues, but fixable.
All in all it's style is rather classical, but not bad.

As general tip:
Try to give tees some space in the parts, imagine there are 10 people at the same time in your parts and how you could make their life easier with space and plattforms then.

[BannZay]

Still very buggy,so testing map together with mapper only

[Welf]

I had a short look at it (not really a full test)

I am not sure if this map should be released. I think yes, but we have to work on your mapping style.
It is easy to notice that you just started at mapping, i am just showing you some major issues.
The drag parts are really tight, beginners can't jump that exact, you should make some more space between the corners.
It is really weird for noobs to understand your marks. In one part you are fail if you forget to go in the (a little bit) hidden solo off.

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here you get spammed everytime you restart the part, change that. (besides that the idea of the part is cool with the "invisible" tiles)

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you should make hookthrough with unhookables instead of hookables

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You use many different images for hook/unhook, this is too confusing (especially for beginners)

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if you make lines like that to mark e.g. unsolo, you should do it like did (maybe use another color, mine is bad here, because it is hard to see)

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[eliminator]

Thank you Welf for you testing . I fixed all the things ... only one i didn't fix because i want it (imegines for hook/unhook) i like when on map is more colours. Maybe i must do "info room" and than it's easy to understand which one is hook or unhook.
(sry for my bad english)

[eliminator]

[Broken]

it still needs a lot of work man. try harder! don't make it so ugly. about 1/3 parts are good, make them the same difficulty and fun to do. can't pass as it is.

[Welf]

Broken told you what to do, i will archive it until you did a rework. i hope you understand what we want from you.