Tested map with mapper, I liked the map. There were many new creative parts and I think it's not a problem that the map is that faily, because of its shortness.

I'm sorry Ninjed, I didn't know that there's already a map called "ShortGun"
I hope it is ok for you, that I use your map name

fixed everything, also fixed a small "cheat"

My first solo map, I have no logo and bg yet (but imo (no) bg fits good to map design)
Maybe someone can make a logo for me, if he wants to.
Have fun testing it