Looks fun for very new players. I like the fading and appearing clouds + the harmless music in the background, creative idea. Nothing else to criticize about it though. I agree with 1-2* Novice.

Just like noro and nora this one is just as nice as your previous ones of this series. Personally I don't like that you changed rocket part to jetpack, nothing much competitive anymore in this map unlike noro and nora where you actually had at least 1 harder part. Still good map. screenshot_2018-05-...

Nicely done, good to learn reversed shotgun physics, pretty design and good built parts for average to above average players. Would like to see it live.

We all know how "first maps" looks like, some are better some are worse. This is nowhere near to your chosen difficulty, it's very tight and parts are not creative. Secondly you have a really bad structure on how your map is built. Compare your map to real Novice maps, it should be for new...

It's a very long map after all playing it through but thats ok, just the closer u get to finish the more boring it gets imo. Looks like you try to fill some gaps within the map, this is novice. screenshot_2018-05-20_21-37-51.png Same here trying to fill gaps with boring walkthrough and then eventual...

This map seems like made in 20 minutes max, not much effort put into creativity of parts, design of freeze and unfreeze doesnt fit, + unbalanced parts. For me this can't be released with that current version, at this point you gotta overwork the whole map again + fix all issues, u sometimes tried to...

Brutal 1* max, good map for t0 exspecially, didnt find anything that has to be changed with that being said should be an easy release

Good design + gameplay should be an instant release, found 1 skip but it's not that big of a deal since undeep is right on the ground, might save time though, or is it intended skip anyway?

Didnt find anything special, just 1 design bug, decent gameplay not the best though screenshot_2018-05-20_14-39-13.png screenshot_2018-05-20_14-39-14.png I assume it isnt meant to be like this. Secondly, you might want to force 2p teams because you are using alot of time-switches that can be cheated...