Ok, here are any Design-Bugs from your Map.
Please change this and than we can test it together!
But for your first map is this really good!

Good parts! Nice Design! Amazing Background!

Yes, i know that u can shot with laser there. But i dont like that Part.

I think this Map is never an Moderate Map!!!
I dont like that Map. I missed more good Teamplay Parts

I hate this Part:

Amazing long Novice Map! I didnt find any bug.
Would be 4* i think.