see if the map has errors

new version of the map, please check if you have errors

NOT NEED TO DO A NEW I THINK THAT I CAN IMPROVE IT

It is not creative? ok ... I will do more creative. I have to do it all over again or just parts?

My map is right?

Hello, I am beginner, I live in Brazil, use the google translator to post, where I find the rules to post, could not find to read, I sending a new map update with the suggested changes, make sure I'm doing right in posting and on the map, as the forum is only English have difficulty understanding, t...

My first map, please test